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Wednesday, October 12, 2011

Short Story conclusion (with outline)

Authors note:
For class we had to write a conclusion on Rapunzel, but change the story a little. We changed the story by saying the Prince was to fat and weak to climb her hair.

- A lady got sick and her husband went and got her medicine over the wall in their evil neighbors yard

- The couple had to give their baby up to her to be able to live

- When the girl was 12, she got locked in a tower with no door, no stairs, no way to get out.

- One day, a prince came by and tried climbing Rapunzel’s hair, up to the tower, but he was too fat.

The man struggled so much, but then one day, he used all his might, but accidently pulled her down. She was flopping through the air. The girl and the horse made some great contact, when she fell onto his back. She was passed out. He carried her all the way to the middle of the forest, dropped her, and left. This prince came back, about a week later, and she was gone. He searched everywhere for her, and one day he finally found her. She was laying in a ditch, crying, with a shaved head. The prince couldn’t believe this. She looked really ugly without her hair, so he left her alone to sob by herself. And he never came back.

1 comment:

  1. Nice ending, if a little shallow on behalf of the prince. A stranger man runs up to her, yanks her hair, knocks her out, abducts her, and then abandons her in the middle of the forest, only to come back and call her ugly. No wonder she was crying!

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